CK Lynn

It was okay. The was definately emotion, though the piece seemed flat, somehow. You tell us the character hates her job, instead of letting her show it. The character becomes ...

Reveiwed!

This was very different, dark and bittersweet. I liked the constant rythmn, very nice. This kind of reminds me of a song I heard in church..."I was there..." or something ...

Oookkayyy....

The ryhme didn't work for me. Other than that, I really liked it. Please, expand! This theme deserves a longer poem!

As the title says, I will review poetry. Gauranteed to be at least 1 paragraph (5 sentances) not counting quotes. In return either 5 points or 1 crit.

Nice. It was sentimental and true without feeling too gushy. I don't really like the title, though, for some reason. It was a bit too long. Over all it was ...

I liked it. Unique. I would, however, change the title to "Simple" as that.

Pretty good. Not steryotypical like I thought it was going to be, but instead well thought-out and real.

I didn't really get where this poem was going. Is it an enviromental-type thing, or a metaphor for something else? The lack of topic detract from the piece, which, in ...

Yeah, I have no idea what overdraft is (some kind of tax-thing, she guesses?) but the poem itself was whimsical...no, a better word would be light-hearted, without being silly or ...

I rather liked this piece. The imagery was simple, although not in a crude way, and the over-passionated fakeness some love/breakup-type poems have was restrained here. The "And put knots ...

Haunting. Kind of bittersweet, like a happy memory. The only thing wrong I found was that sometimes you don't capitalize your I's.

I don't know why you deleted this. From what I see on AVilicious666 and LoveableLittleSock's critques, it was quite good, aside from a few captilization/grammer mistakes.

You might consider tossing the poll. They're kind of annoying in the literture sections. The piece itself I enjoyed, emotional without crossing the line to emo or teen-angst poetry. The ...